Applesnitch's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pastoral]

Interesting song! I think that you have a lot of potential as a composer, which is the reason why I'm verifying you for the Newgrounds Audio Portal. Your songs deserve to be heard, and I look forward to other songs by you! Skype me at (Applesnitch) and I'll may be able to get you the full Fruity Loops 12 version for free!

H1K0 responds:

Thanks for the compliment, but I can't believe that I can get FL12 for free. Is it true? And what version of FL?

[Eliminate]

Way better than your last submission! But there are still a truckload of thing that could make this song better.
1. Variation within the drops
2. Complex synths
3. Repetitiveness
There are a bunch of other things too but I don't have much time. Message me if you want to know them!

JaThu responds:

Sorry, I just realized I've never replied this.

1. Totally agree, I'll work on different patternts for drops
2. The reason why I'm not using complex synths is because I can't make them, I always end up with not-so-pretty soundsm I'll work on that too of course.
3. If by repetitiveness you mean "low amounts of patterns" well, I've already replied that, but I'm not so sure what you mean with "repetitiveness", if you're are talking about patterns or just everything sounds repetitive.

Thankyou for reviewing

[Dikó -The Dismissive-]

Sweet tags bro

optimize responds:

ikr

[Diкó- The Tower In The Forest-]

Awesome! What vst do you use to make those growls?

optimize responds:

I tend to use a wide variety of VST in my projects so I can't tell you. Sorry but knowing me probably massive and harmor

[J.A.D.S.]

If this song was so complex, then why is it so simple? YOU CAN DO BETTER THAN THIS! SERIOUSLY!

JaThu responds:

Ok calm down :I I should have written "complex for ME". The rythm itself is easy, but it has 13 drum/perc samples, 6 Synthesizers, 8 VST Effects, 6 Automations all packed in 11 Drum and 13 Lead/Bass clips. I've never used so much propierties, most of my best songs are simple without any trace of automations.

I'm not saying it's the most complex song ever but I'm doing progress here, getting to know each detail using simple but catchy patterns is one of my actual goals.

Which part of my song you think is simple? Or is it the whole tune? tell me please, I want to get better, writing in caps that I'm doing wrong doesn't helps me improve.

(Besides... the name of the song is Just Another Dance Song... maybe you don't get the joke)

[Hate]

Awesome song Lethalix! You do some amazing work and I wondering whether you would want to collaborate with me on one of the songs in my album that should be coming out soon! Let me know if you're interested!

KamillasRainbow responds:

Thanks you, if you wonna collab just add me on skype (gd_raavan)

[Dikó -Jack The Ripper-]

Interesting song! I like the ideas that you implemented into the submission, but I wish that they were clearer and more coherent. For example, I would have made the basses less gritty, to help with the overall quality of the song. You have to be very careful when it comes to the grit of a bass. If you overdose a bass with it, as you did in this song, then it can ruin the overall quality of the submission. Very nice piece though, but you need to touch up on just a few things. Besides that, everything was amazing.

optimize responds:

fair feedback
reasoned well
good comment
i'll focus on that grit!

[God Mode]

Gotta love those DJVI melodies.

[Happiness]

This is an excellent song! I love how the chords focus to a specific melody that truly conveys an example of happiness. I love how the songs is not saccharine in any way. You mastered the synths used in this song well, therefore creating an outstanding piece of music. Well done, Lethalix.

KamillasRainbow responds:

Thanks dude :)

[Z Pulse [Flozo88]]

Awesome! I'm gonna scout you one more time, just be careful about uploading things without permission. Oh, and by the way, we need to collaborate on a song.

Flozo88 responds:

Yeah...we should

And...I will be a LOT more careful... ;)