Applesnitch's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[J.A.D.S.]

If this song was so complex, then why is it so simple? YOU CAN DO BETTER THAN THIS! SERIOUSLY!

JaThu responds:

Ok calm down :I I should have written "complex for ME". The rythm itself is easy, but it has 13 drum/perc samples, 6 Synthesizers, 8 VST Effects, 6 Automations all packed in 11 Drum and 13 Lead/Bass clips. I've never used so much propierties, most of my best songs are simple without any trace of automations.

I'm not saying it's the most complex song ever but I'm doing progress here, getting to know each detail using simple but catchy patterns is one of my actual goals.

Which part of my song you think is simple? Or is it the whole tune? tell me please, I want to get better, writing in caps that I'm doing wrong doesn't helps me improve.

(Besides... the name of the song is Just Another Dance Song... maybe you don't get the joke)

[Hate]

Awesome song Lethalix! You do some amazing work and I wondering whether you would want to collaborate with me on one of the songs in my album that should be coming out soon! Let me know if you're interested!

KamillasRainbow responds:

Thanks you, if you wonna collab just add me on skype (gd_raavan)

[Dikó -Jack The Ripper-]

Interesting song! I like the ideas that you implemented into the submission, but I wish that they were clearer and more coherent. For example, I would have made the basses less gritty, to help with the overall quality of the song. You have to be very careful when it comes to the grit of a bass. If you overdose a bass with it, as you did in this song, then it can ruin the overall quality of the submission. Very nice piece though, but you need to touch up on just a few things. Besides that, everything was amazing.

optimize responds:

fair feedback
reasoned well
good comment
i'll focus on that grit!

[Happiness]

This is an excellent song! I love how the chords focus to a specific melody that truly conveys an example of happiness. I love how the songs is not saccharine in any way. You mastered the synths used in this song well, therefore creating an outstanding piece of music. Well done, Lethalix.

KamillasRainbow responds:

Thanks dude :)

[Z Pulse [Flozo88]]

Awesome! I'm gonna scout you one more time, just be careful about uploading things without permission. Oh, and by the way, we need to collaborate on a song.

Flozo88 responds:

Yeah...we should

And...I will be a LOT more careful... ;)

[Friendly Fire]

Quite a few things could be fixed in this song. I know that I wrote a criticizing comment on YouTube, but I wanted to make a more in-depth one here. The first thing is that you always the default preset in FL Keys, which sounds terrible, no matter what effects you have on it. Another thing is that you always use on cymbal roll sample over and over again. I believe that you are hurting your songs without yourself even realizing. These problems can be fixed very easily. You can use a different preset on FL Keys. I suggest using "Dance Piano," but I have a good sounding one here for you if you want it. I made it myself. Smart Piano FST: http://www.mediafire.com/download/v0uc4a1f91n1j1j/Smart+Piano.fst. About the cymbal roll, there are a plethora of samples out there, and one site I suggest is LooperMan. It is a great place where you can get many well-sounding samples for free! Anyways, nice melody, but there are a lot of things that could have been improved upon.

JaThu responds:

To-ta-lly agree man, I always liked your comments... the first 3 seconds I'm like "why don't you go..." XD but you're totally right. Thing is that I don't have the time to make specific details, and that obviously fucks the songs. So now on I'll try to put some effort on those things. Thanks.

[Shift]

Happy Birthday! Time to Break Out the Beer!

Noisysundae responds:

Thanks a lot. :D

[~NK~ "Fracture"]

Why does it say, "Second drop, right now," at the first drop?

Rukkus responds:

"fucking" drop right now ;P

[I read shit.]

OMG NEW RUKKUS CONFIRMED

Spurta responds:

Haha, I've got no intentions of actually voicing out on any tracks unless I've got a good reason to, like actually talking about stuff.

I can spit a few rhymes, but I don't have the proper equipment to do that, either.

[Bittersweet]

Wow! This is a very impressive song! I always enjoy listening to your music, and I am still in awe that you are able to master such beauty. Outstanding job!

Noisysundae responds:

Thanks man. Glad to know you ate other sundaes as well.